River's View Part Two: Forest of the Dead

First of all, I apologise for taking so long to post this. Here's part two of River's View, a feature that charts a story part from the eyes of River Song. 

"What's wrong with it?" I ask, approaching the Doctor.
"There's a signal coming from somewhere interfering with it." he replies, studying his screwdriver.
"Use the red settings." I instruct.
"It doesn't have a red setting." The Doctor objects.
"Well, use the dampers."
"It doesn't have "dampers!"
"It will do one day." I retort.
The Doctor stands. "So sometime in the future I just give you my screwdriver." he asks incredulously.
"Yeah."
"Why would I do that?
"I didn't pluck it from your cold dead hands if that's what you're worried about." I assure him.
"And I know that because...?"
"Listen to me, you've lost your friend—you're angry, I understand. But you need to be less emotional, Doctor. Right now—"
"Less emotion— I'm not emotional!"
"There are five people in this room still alive! Focus on that. Dear god, you're hard work young." I snap.
"Young— Who are you?!" the Doctor demands.
"Oh for heaven's sake! Look at the pair of you." Lux breaks in. "We're all going to die right here and you're just squabbling like an old married couple!"
The Doctor and I stare at each other. "Doctor. One day I'm going to be someone that you trust. Completely. But I can't wait for you to find that out. So I'm going to prove it to you. And I'm sorry. I'm really very sorry." Carefully, I lean forward and whisper a word in his ear. His name. He stares at me. "Are we good? Doctor. Are we good?"
He nods once, still speechless. "Yeah, we're good."

Again, sorry this took so long in the posting. 

DoctorWhoDragon will be posting The Time of Angels soon. 

L Bunting

River's View Part One: Silence in the Library

Here's part one of River's View, a feature that charts a story part from the eyes of River Song.

PART ONE: SILENCE IN THE LIBRARY

"Thanks," I say, flipping through my diary. 

"For what?" the Doctor asks, leaning against the desk.

"The usual. For coming when I call."

"That was you?" 

"You're doing a very good job acting like you don't know me." I reply. "I'm assuming there's a reason."

"Oh, a fairly good one actually." He mutters.
"Okay, should we do diaries then? Where are we this time? Going by your face I'd say it's early days for you, yeah?" I look over him, then back at the diary. "So, um... Crash of the Byzantium. Have we done that yet?" His face is blank. "Obviously ringing no bells. Alright, um. Picnic at Asgard, Have we done Asgard yet?" I ask, remembering Asgard fondly. He, however, doesn't seem to. "Obviously not. Blimey, very early days then. Oo! Life with a time traveller, never knew it could be such hard work. Um..." I pause. He's staring at me. "Look at you. You're young."

"I'm really not, you know," he says with a slight smile.

"Oh but you are. Your eyes!" I caress the side of his face. "You're younger than I've ever seen you."

"You've...seen me before then?" 

A horrible feeling fills me. "Doctor," I say softly. "Please tell me you know who I am." I will him to say, "Oh, River, of course I know who you are!" but he doesn't. He glances at my hand on his shoulder, then meets my gaze. "Who are you?"

In those three words, my hearts break.

I will be doing Forest of the Dead sometime this week. Check the rota to see the who will be doing the next Views.

River's View Starts Tomorrow

River's View will be officially starting tomorrow, with Silence in the Library done by me. All other Views will follow at the convenience of the assigned writer. Please review my last post and confirm which episodes you will be doing. Thanks, everyone!

River's View: TARDIS

This is the River's View post certain people (DWD and me) has hopefully told you about.

Time: The Time Of The Angels
Location: TARDIS

River's View Rota So Far (Update)

First of all, I'd like to thank DoctorWhoDragon and GoodGum for replying.

Here's what we have so far for River's View based on what people have said. KEEP IN MIND THIS IS IN NO WAY FINAL AS Hezza has not yet given any input.

Silence in the Library/Forest of the Dead: L Bunting

The Time of Angels: DoctorWhoDragon
Flesh and Stone: GoodGum

The Pandorica Opens: DoctorWhoDragon
The Big Bang: L Bunting

The Impossible Astronaut/Day of the Moon: PreTitlessequence

A Good Man Goes to War/Let's Kill Hitler: GoodGum

Closing Time: PreTitlessequence

The Wedding of River Song: DoctorWhoDragon

Thanks to everyone who replied! I've put PTS down for Closing Time, The Impossible Astronaut, and Day of the Moon.

DoctorWhoDragon I've put down for The Pandorica Opens, and The Time of Angels.  We are each currently doing three episodes, but if/when Hezza joines, this may change.

Sorry if this post was a big rambling mess on my part, but I need this sort of thing to get everything straight in my over-active, insane mind. Anyway. Thanks. I'll shut up now. =)

RiverArt

heres another RiverArt:

Other

When you click other on a poll type in on the comments on this post the catorgary and your idea thank you ;)

River Awards

Well these were mentioned and no one bothered to do them RIVER AWARDS. The catorgories are: .............................................……………….......................................……................................................................................................................................................. Best episode. Funniest moment. Best line. Flintiest moment (not sure where that came from) and best revelation about river......................................................... polls up soon :)

River's View Rota Coming Soon

This is just a re-write of the previous post.

Once our fifth member, Hezza, has joined the blog, we'll start River's View, a paragraph or so of an episode written from River's point of view. The episodes are as follows:

Silence in the Library
Forest of the Dead
The Time of Angels
Flesh and Stone
The Pandorica Opens
The Big Bang
The Impossible Astronaut
Day of the Moon
A Good Man Goes to War
Let's Kill Hitler
Closing Time
The Wedding of River Song

In the comments, please specify which episodes you'd like to do. Keep in mind that no one will be assigned an episode until Hezza has joined, as it would be unfair to him. We will most likely be doing two Views for each episode, but this is yet to be confirmed. Thanks!

L Bunting

Rivers view

As a pointer this was lydias idea not mine but we could do rivers view AFTER I have Hezzas email and he's joined Episodes with River: Silence in the library Forest of the dead Flesh and stone Time of Angels The pandorica opens The big bang 2 The impossible astronaught Day of the moon A good man goes to war Let's kill hitler The wedding of river song And if anyone wants to do the small section from closing time let Lydia know, or me, :))) Depending on if hezza arrives in time or not there should be two views each.

RIVERS TIMELINE

DEMONS RUN

She was born in battle at Demons Run where Madame Kovarian stole her and took her away

ORPHANAGE

Madame Kovarian took Melody to an Orphanage on Earth in Florida

ON THE STREETS + REGENERATION

Having escaped the suit, and dying, Melody lived on the streets of florida where she regenerated

BEST FRIENDS

Melody took up the nickname Mels and became best friends with young Rory and Amy and they grew up together

BERLIN

the Doctor finally came, and she knew from Kovarian that she must kill him, and after being shot by Hitler, she poisened him with poison of the Judas tree, she then used up all of her remaining regenerations to save him. In return he left her a TARDIS blue diary.

ARCHAEOLOGY

River becomes an Archaeologist to find the Doctor.

CAPTURED

River is made: Doctor River Song, and is captured by Kovarian and forced into the spacesuit to kill the Doctor

I CAN'T KILL YOU

River refuses to kill the Doctor and all of time happens at once.

A WEDDING AND A FUNERAL

the Doctor marries River and also shows her that he is the Tesslecta and she kills him, so that time continues

PRISON AND DEMONS RUN

River is sent to Stormcage and she is sent to Demons Run once again and she tells the Doctor she is Amy and Rory's daughter.

INVITE

she recieves a letter from the Doctor and is once again at Lake Silencio watching the Doctor die, she also kills the Silence and kisses the Doctor for the last time.

BYZANTIUM AND AFTER THE BYZANTIUM

At the Byzantium River meets the Doctor again and an Amy who didn't have a clue who she was.
After the Byzantium she went too Amy and revealed to her the Doctor wasn't dead.

EVERYONE DIES, BUT NOT ALL THE TIME

River meets the Doctor, only he doesnt know her yet. It breaks her heart so much she sacrifices her self for him, and he saves her soul inside the library computer.

River's TimeLine

A picture i made: (which is rubbish because the damn program doesnt no what a normal, thin pencil is)

A vid from DWTV:
http://doctorwhotv.co.uk/river-song-her-story-series-4-6-26644.htm

a written version of the timeline will come later

DoctorWhoDragon :)

Rivers view

Yes it's late, very late. But at least it's actually been done :)
 Rivers View: The Wedding of River Song:

I don't have to kill him, I don't want to kill him, so why should I kill him. Because the suit is in control that's why. And because he's telling me I have too, that it's a fixed point in time, I don't have a choice. But I'm me and I have my own ideas and if I drain my weapon systems, no one dies today. But will it work? Or will it create something that I can't fix? Well if I kill him I will never know if I don't kill him, I don't have to suffer and neither does he.
 *shoots but nothing happens*

Doctor: What have you done?

Me: well I think I just drained my weapon systems.

Doctor: but this is a fixed point in time!

Me: fixed points can be rewritten

Doctor: no they can't!! Who told you that?!

 And, suddenly I was in another world, minus spacesuit, I was wearing normal clothes. But I soon found out the truth and that's when I knew what the doctor meant, fixed points should never be rewritten because they all have dangerous consequences...

HERE COMES THE BRIDE...